Nice going lubhita. You are always best when it comes to writing and this sweet poem proofs it. Only you can express deep in heart feelings in such a sweet simple and yet elegant poetic way. Very well done keep it up. Keep rocking
Lubhita your freelance writing is adding feathers to your pen …….
Beautiful poetry with explicit usage of perfect vocabulary and rhyming lines.. keep it intact
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Nice going lubhita. You are always best when it comes to writing and this sweet poem proofs it. Only you can express deep in heart feelings in such a sweet simple and yet elegant poetic way. Very well done keep it up. Keep rocking
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Very nice..it reflects a lot about my little sister, that she isn’t that little any more..
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Beautiful and touching. Keep it up👍
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Thank you Jija 😘
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Raw, I would say. Written out of willingness to write something ???
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Not my best, I know.. And yes I wrote it because I wanted to write something.. Probably couldn’t put a lot into it coz it was fictional..
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Lubhita your freelance writing is adding feathers to your pen …….
Beautiful poetry with explicit usage of perfect vocabulary and rhyming lines.. keep it intact
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Thank you Shweta 😘
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Nice 👍
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