Ah! The grave anguish
Of meeting you again,
The mixed feelings of being with you,
the longing, the pain.
It has been a year,
we had that row.
And parted ways,
tried to let go..
Things didn’t work out
as I envisaged.
It’s probable, I am getting
difficult with age.
Don’t get me wrong,
I love to see you flourish.
Your triumphs, your laughter,
Your memories I cherish.
You flit in and out of my life.
This is your right.
Yet, fleeting is your attention,
blind, the sight.
The scant time you can accord
leads me to believe,
I won’t pass away with a regret,
the bond we forged will provide reprieve.
Overwhelmed with love and joy
of your company, I forgo the claim.
But do tell me if I deserve just
these Borrowed Minutes to my name..
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An unusual, unprecedented piece from you. And it’s gooood. More than just good. And no. You don’t deserve borrowed minutes at all. You got the whole prime time slot. 😛 😛
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Hahaha.. Kya baat… And you call such comments not up to the mark.. They are the best.. Thank you ☺
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Appealing poem…straight from your heart…
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Woww… that’s great
Just read it.. ❤
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Thank you Saurabh☺
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अंतिम दो पंक्तियां कविता को दर्द भरी पूर्णता प्रदान करती हैं । शानदार ।
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Mama, I wrote it for the last two lines only.. ‘Borrowed Minutes’, the phrase, being central to my thought process.. Thank you ☺
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Good one….very well composed.👌
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Thank you di
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Nice lubhi well expressed ..
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Wow!! You articulate beautifully what probably everyone’s feeling :).
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Beautiful lines
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Excellent!
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Nice Lk
Nice as always
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Nice Lk
Nice as always
Keep writing
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Nice lines, dear.
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Nice lubhita
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Nicely writtn nd well said…
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when you love people enough to let them go, this act make your soul pure and beautiful same as the words you have used in borrowed Minutes.
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But, It isn’t easy to let anyone go
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Hahaha… Nothing is easy now a days, not even breathing.
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I second that😊
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Hello miss poetess,,,, beautiful felt like reading it again and again
Getting romantic ….
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Thank you shweta😘😘😘😍😍
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Wow great… 😊
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You finally read😅 अब सारे पढ़ो
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For some people happiness comes easier than others, but what we’re starting to understand is that happiness — that sense of connection and ease of appreciating the good moments and being more graceful and resilient during the difficult ones — is a skill and strength that we can all build.
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You are right sir.. 😊Thank you for reading!!
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Wow…. superb
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